Rough Cut Feedback

After looking at out rough cut the teachers decided that we needed to have a wider variety of shots. We initially felt like the shots we have from different angles were poor due to the bad mise en scene but the teachers said suggested that they weren't all bad and that it was better to have different shots with a bad mise en scene than to have limited shots. Also it the memories which we portrayed in video should be slowed down and shown in black and white to add emphasis. They also suggested that we add more people in the video because in the beginning there was only Bridie and Marilyn and it was suggested that the relationship between them made them seem as if they were in a relationship rather than close friends, so we went out and got some people to pose as other friends.